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Anatomy of Horror - David Hohl
http://www.davidhohl.com/
E-mail: david@davidhohl.com
(310) 496-0999
With over ten years as a script consultant, and a five star rating as a
story doctor, David Hohl brings screenwriters of all levels the needed boost
to get market ready. Both his reasonable fee, and very personal attention
has made David a well sought after consultant and mentor and owner of Anatomy
of Horror Master Course. Although he has over a decade in all genres of
screenplays, he specializes in Horror, Sci-Fi, and Fantasy.
Script Analysis for your feature
- A complete, multiple reading of your script (once for flow, pacing,
and readability, and the second for detailed story analysis.)
- Recorded Audio Notes on your script, suggestions on how to improve your
re-write and get it ready for sale. Provided in a detailed MP3 for you
to listen during your commute, or whenever convenient.
- A script matrix graphic explaining how you were ranked in certain areas
- Email support if you have questions on the notes
- Guaranteed work by David Hohl, not an intern or assistant
$395 flat rate (120pages or less). Don't confuse cheap coverage services with
script analysis services. If you have questions, email us (see discount below
for Ink Tip).
Additional phone consulting: $125/hr
$100 off Analysis for all InkTip members if they mention InkTip. Limited
Time Offer. Call NOW.
Testimonials:
"Your comments about the main characters arc were especially helpful.
Most important to me, you understood what I was trying to accomplish and gave
vital suggestions for developing the script's potential. I look forward to
working with you in the future and I'd recommend your services to any aspiring
screen writer."
-Robert Hendrickson (writer of SAY GOODNIGHT, ROMEO)
"As a beginning screenwriter, Mr. Hohl's professional insight guided me in
developing a marketable property. His constructive analysis was thorough,
and his enthusiasm inspired me to work harder to create my vision. After using
David Hohl's HotScripts twice, I give my highest recommendation. His reasonable
fees are money well spent."
-Ari Mello (Writer of CAESAR)
"David knows how to hone in on a script's weaknesses and was willing to custom--taylor
my coverage for specific questions I had. Your money is well spent here."
-Jay
Note: Jay's script was optioned after analysis.
"David's script analysis helped me look at my screenplay from a new perspective,
allowing a more creative and solid re-writing process. I'd suggest using him
before any rewrite, and certainly before sending any script out to market."
-Martin Wheeler (Produced Writer of: 7 Seconds, Black Dawn, The Detonator)
"Thank you so much for the feedback on Selfish Help. I really appreciate your
thoughtful and clever comments. I'm reading it through now and taking notes.
Your suggestion for Scott's character arc is nothing short of brilliant!."
-Wendy N (writer of SELFISH HELP)
And, as a personal screenplay mentor...
"As a beginner screenwriter, David Hohl's expertise on how to write a screenplay
has been priceless. David's patience , perseverance, and unique ability to
ask the right questions has challenged me as a writer not to settle for ordinary
, but to dig deep and strive for extraordinary writing, that will capture
an audience's attention. His one on one attention has given me all the tools
I needed to begin my journey into writing my first screenplay!!! David is
very motivating and encouraging and always positive! I am fortunate & thankful
to be working with such a gifted writer and teacher!"
- Holly Angel
Contact:
David Hohl
http://www.davidhohl.com/
E-mail: david@davidhohl.com
(310) 496-0999
Twitter: ScriptMD
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