Consultants & Classes
With over ten years as a script consultant, and a five star rating as a story doctor, David Hohl brings screenwriters of all levels the needed boost to get market ready. Both his reasonable fee, and very personal attention has made David a well sought-after consultant and mentor. David has done script analysis for studio writers to screenplay newbies. His personal and attentive touch will bring your project to the next level.
*Five star rated consultant at Script Pipeline
Script Analysis for your feature
- A complete, multiple reading of your script (once for flow, pacing, and readability, and the second for detailed story analysis.)
- Advanced script notes OR Recorded Audio Notes (MP3) on your script, suggestions on how to improve your re-write and get it ready for sale. Notes on arc, theme, dialogue, pace, commercial potential, etc.
- A script matrix graphic explaining how you were ranked in certain areas
- Email support if you have questions on the notes
- Guaranteed work by David Hohl, not an intern or assistant
- Discount on Future drafts
- Marketing Suggestions
Analysis Fee: $375.00 (Mention InkTip for $100 off.)
"Your comments about the main characters arc were especially
helpful. Most important to me, you understood what I was trying to accomplish
and gave vital suggestions for developing the script's potential. I look
forward to working with you in the future and I'd recommend your services to
any aspiring screen writer."
-Robert Hendrickson (writer of SAY GOODNIGHT, ROMEO)
"As a beginning screenwriter, Mr. Hohl's professional insight
guided me in developing a marketable property. His constructive analysis was
thorough, and his enthusiasm inspired me to work harder to create my vision.
After using David Hohl's HotScripts twice, I give my highest recommendation. His
reasonable fees are money well spent."
-Ari Mello (Writer of CAESAR)
"David knows how to hone in on a script's weaknesses and was
willing to custom-taylor my coverage for specific questions I had. Your money
is well spent here."
Note: Jay's script was optioned after analysis.
"David's script analysis helped me look at my screenplay from a
new perspective, allowing a more creative and solid re-writing process. I'd
suggest using him before any rewrite, and certainly before sending any script
out to market."
-Martin Wheeler (Produced Writer of: 7 Seconds, Black Dawn, The Detonator)
"Thank you so much for the feedback on Selfish Help. I really
appreciate your thoughtful and clever comments. I'm reading it through now and
taking notes. Your suggestion for Scott's character arc is nothing short of
-Wendy N (writer of SELFISH HELP)
And, as a personal screenplay mentor...
"As a beginner screenwriter, David Hohl's expertise on how to
write a screenplay has been priceless. David's patience, perseverance and
unique ability to ask the right questions has challenged me as a writer not to
settle for ordinary , but to dig deep and strive for extraordinary writing,
that will capture an audience's attention. His one on one attention has given
me all the tools I needed to begin my journey into writing my first
screenplay!!! David is very motivating and encouraging and always positive! I
am fortunate & thankful to be working with such a gifted writer and
- Holly Angel
"The horror genre is a great point-of-entry for aspiring
screenwriters and filmmakers. But you need an amazing script that will
stand out from the pack. David Hohl gives you the tools and techniques
to write a killer script that will help jumpstart your career."
"David has worked with me several times and consulted on two
scripts I'm producing. His analysis and discussion with my writers was an
invaluable resource in getting the scripts into a polished state, ready for
-Chris Soth (Million Dollar Screenwriting)
One Year-One HORROR Project Personal Apprenticeships also available